هنا

[سامح]

Being a lone ..feeling sad …
.hearing a song and tears fall a long
In killing silence and darker night ..
And a sudden visitor breaks the silence ..
Coming near and near
Whisper to you …are you ok??
You rise your head with a wide smile
Answering the visitor with broken voice
I am happy, free, alone with no choice

Zahrra

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Take me away friend of my life
I seek for paradise
I hold my dream, now I'm with you
I want you like a coat
Wear you when I feel cold
Let me complain , show my timeless sorrow
Cause you are the one who makes me continue
In this dark , miserable creation
Help me help to stand , hand by hand
Together we will build a river of smile
Eternal happiness is going to drink
hold me at the end I have two things in this life
you and you

Me

[ḾïSs TǿTà]

Fantastic


thax to U & Zahrra

[سامح]

you welcome friend we are waiting for you to be a good writer
thank you

[ḾïSs TǿTà]

you welcome friend we are waiting for you to be a good writer
thank you

You will wait much of time

[سامح]

hehehehe ok doesn't matter while the idea of writing is static

[ٱجَمل ٱنٌسًٱنٌة]

many thanks for u and zahrra

[سامح]

many thanks for u and zahrra

thanks for bieng here

[Legend of fall]

I really, really enjoyed reading your and Zahraa´ words. There were two special things that brought my attention to your work. The first one, when you started writing, your words could tell that you were just yourselves as if you were thinking loud, also, I liked the idea of choosing easy words it made your work look in better shape and you guys used your creativity in putting thoughts in the right place other than spending time and energy in using difficult words that we usually acknowledge one side of their meaning , or at least follow what the dictionary tells us
.
The second thing I liked about your work, that you actually ( were ) thinking in English, and I really admired that fact in you guys and its basically the corner stone of your future
.
The only thing I would recommend as a friend of yours, If you plan to write the same way in Future, it´s very good to consider the form that you are going to use before writing, then your work would look more professional and would be worth sharing with people whom master this field. If you plan to write a poem, you have to make sure that your stanzas are well rhymed, otherwise you work can be shaped on paragraphs and that would look fascinating.
Amazing work brother, and please bid my greetings to Zahraa´ and looking forward to seeing more of you
.
L.o.F

[سامح]

I really, really enjoyed reading your and Zahraa´ words. There were two special things that brought my attention to your work. The first one, when you started writing, your words could tell that you were just yourselves as if you were thinking loud, also, I liked the idea of choosing easy words it made your work look in better shape and you guys used your creativity in putting thoughts in the right place other than spending time and energy in using difficult words that we usually acknowledge one side of their meaning , or at least follow what the dictionary tells us
.
The second thing I liked about your work, that you actually ( were ) thinking in English, and I really admired that fact in you guys and its basically the corner stone of your future
.
The only thing I would recommend as a friend of yours, If you plan to write the same way in Future, it´s very good to consider the form that you are going to use before writing, then your work would look more professional and would be worth sharing with people whom master this field. If you plan to write a poem, you have to make sure that your stanzas are well rhymed, otherwise you work can be shaped on paragraphs and that would look fascinating.
Amazing work brother, and please bid my greetings to Zahraa´ and looking forward to seeing more of you
.
L.o.F

Iam really confused by this huge comment , but i want to ay something the words come as a comptition it costs 15 munites
again thanks alot legend you are really legend

[ღالبرنسيسةღ]

sensitive words happy to read them
Good luck friends
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